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Kim Williams, M. Div.'s avatar

This: “But I still yearn up at the stars above

and wonder if that light

could possibly be real.” I felt that. Lovely.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you, Kim!! ❤️

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Danny Lau's avatar

I can be unstoppable too if I never start!

Jk 😂

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

That's one way to do it!

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Forest Night's avatar

Beautifully written and inspiring.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you. ❤️

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Sara Krane's avatar

This is so very beautiful 💌 love it

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you, Sara! Just a sweet something!

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Rebecca Stone's avatar

This is so gorgeous Hannah 🤍

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Hi Rebecca!! Thank you. 🥰✨️

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Rebecca Stone's avatar

My pleasure! 🥰✨✨

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notes for an inner kid's avatar

the first line already touches my heart.

Another all-in-girl is heeeeere!!✨

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Love this! Just subscribed. Can't wait to be part of your journey. 💗

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notes for an inner kid's avatar

You are welcome!!! Let's grow together!!✨

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notes for an inner kid's avatar

this whole poem is soooo beautifully written~ Thank you Hannah for sharing this piece 💚

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

I love learning that. And thank you so much!! So great to meet you, virtually! 🫶

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Kind Talk Project's avatar

I love how you've woven the theme of perseverance and self-discovery throughout your writing. 🙏💗

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you for this! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. 😊

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Things we never say's avatar

Might just be the best words to describe what unlocking your potential means.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you!! ❤️

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Data Frank's avatar

I love how your dedication is mirrored in the natural wonder of the aurora.

The line that really struck me was, “But I still yearn up at the stars above and wonder if that light could possibly be real.” It captures that mix of awe, hope, and persistent striving so beautifully.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you, Frank. The Northern Lights really inspired me. I really feel who I am is so connected to them, it's hard to explain, but this short poem captured a piece of it.

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Data Frank's avatar

I’m glad you feel connected

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Honey Lock's avatar

This is beautiful

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you!!! 💗

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imi's avatar

Your writing feels so soft and gentle. I really enjoyed reading this. It felt like fresh air.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you, Imi 🥹🥰

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lokikone's avatar

Breathtaking! Your words carry the kind of awe that makes dedication feel like an inevitable force. To compare your focus to the aurora borealis is not just poetic, it’s a reminder that what shines within you is rare. Thank you!

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you, you get it!! 🥰❤️ I really appreciate you taking the time to read and engage.

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Brann Solen's avatar

I understand. Likewise, when I concentrate on a fascinating task, all else fades away.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Very true! Thanks for reading!

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Swathi's avatar

This is so beautiful! Love the aurora borealis metaphor and the visual 💕

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you so much!! So glad you enjoyed. ❤️

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ULM StoryHouse's avatar

This captures so well what it feels like to grow into a version of yourself you didn’t know was possible. The surreal moments don’t make it less real… just more remarkable. Thank you for sharing. 🤍

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Thank you!! 🥹🩷 You got it.

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Ian DM Taniels's avatar

I liked the idea of believing without seeing but still doubting because you haven't seen it with your own eyes.

I also thought of the parallel or next logical step of sometimes forgetting what we're capable of even though we KNOW we have been capable of it.

Don't know if this makes sense, I'm really tired and will finish my book and head to bed, hahah.

Anyway: Thought-provoking and well written. Thank you for sharing.

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Hannah Torkelson's avatar

Makes sense, yes! Thank you so much for reading and sharing feedback. It is so meaningful to me.

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